Sbjoern a écrit:En effet, j'ai inversé les sujets dans la phrase sur Omada, d'où les erreurs dans la phrase suivante (me semblait bien que ça faisait bizarre).
La traduction anglaise fournie par macho man (edit: et qu'il a déjà enlevée) est correcte.
Re-edit, j'hésite maintenant, les très longues phrases n'ont jamais été mon fort, dans le doute je fais toujours confiance aux autres traducteurs, comme ça si ils se plantent c'est pas ma faute
Re-re-edit maintenant je suis sur que ma trad est incorrecte. Aillant mal compris la phrase à propos d'Omada, j'ai traduit la longue phrase avec dans la tête le principe que Omada était le guest qui dessinait 2pages pour Toyble, pas l'inverse, ce qui a conduit à une très mauvaise traduction.
J'envoie un texte corrigé à Xevious, il réuploadera les page.
Merci pour la restructuration des pages, ils sont en HQ? ImageShack il a réduit de qualité?
il s'agit d'une traduction du japonais vers l'anglais que j'ai récemment trouvé:
First issue special guest
Dragon Ball AF: Episode Zero
- The promise with Shen Long -
Manga: toyble
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The final decisive battle
with the Evil Dragons...
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RUMBLE...
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Goku, who was hit by Omega Shenlong's
last attack, used up all his strength
and eventually lost his life.
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Rise...
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(Fuwa) = an onomatopoeia used when something floats.
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It looks like I died again...
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Son Goku...
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Shenlong!?
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What?
You can see me?
Does that mean you're dead too?
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That's not the case.
My entity is being destroyed by
My entity on the Earth has been
destroyed by Omega Shen Long,
and I am now in a spiritual form...
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Son Goku...!
Would you listen to two wishes
I have?
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Shenlong wishes something from me?
What a rare event!
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For one I want you to defeat
Omega Shen Long and liberate
my soul.
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What are you saying, Shenlong?
I'm dead so I can't fight any longer.
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If I use up my remaining power,
it's possible for me to bring you
back to life for a few minutes.
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Really!!?
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But I need you to listen to my
second wish as well.
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I want you to supply your body
for my entity.
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Would you then come with me to
the *Ryuoshin's Sacred Realm?
* (or Sacred World of the Dragon King)
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...!
What's that?
The "Ryuoshin's Sacred Realm"...?
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It is my home.
It is a world which is completely
cut off from the external world.
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Once you enters there, you cannot go out
unless you are summoned by the dragon balls.
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... I don't quite understand it,
but anything's okay if I'll be
brought back to life!
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I have to beat that Li Shenlong!
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Is that really okay?
You won't be able to see your
friends again.
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Yeah, no problem.
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I have to listen to your wish too
for a change!
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Thank you Shenlong for listening
to our wishes this whole time!
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Thank you, Son Goku.
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Flash
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And so the resurrected Goku
defeated Omega Shen Long,
then vanished into The Sacred World
of the Dragon King according to
his promise...
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To be continued... (to be continued
in DBAF)
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Nice to meet you, I'm toyble.
Congratulations on the launch of Super DB.
Thanks to Omada-sama's courtesy he let me participate as a guest
and draw these two pages this time.
Since a simple cheering illustration wouldn't be any fun,
I wanted to stick close to some concept... that's what I thought,
but because I'm already drawing a sequel called DBAF myself I
eventually decided to draw some kind of prologue.
In other words, I'm advertising, lol. I'm sorry m(_ _)m
I'll keep praying from the bottom of my heart for a leap forward
of the general development of Dragonball doujinshi in the future.
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